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Wednesday, 23 May 2018
The emerald Gizzmo
One stormy night Active ferns was in a cave and there was a noise saying in a wispier " oh visitors how pleasant". We all look deeper in the cave then a young lady with a big green dress and big green airings aped with mistrust. She shoved with a flash a emerald down my throat and instantly I shrunk into a mini me. She did it to everyone there then they shrunk into mini them. then she shoved one down her throat .....a mini worrier we fight for our life, then i hear a loud beep BEEP!!! heaps more beeps and they are coming from our tummy's AHHHHH! I yell as I get sucked into a portal. "OW" I landed in a demented war zone AHHHH! "Whats that" I explain with myself. "ow" "ow" "ow" "ow" "ow" Active ferns yelled. They all got up BOOM!! AHHHH! I was standing on a pile of dirt then a missile hit the pile "im gonna die from falling" BEEP! "yes" AHH! "ow" Now im in candy land AHHHHH! here everyone comes. We run into a ginger bread house so that the lady in green wont find us. "I see you" whispered the lady in green "Oh no im out of here" so i ate my way out BEEP! "bye guys" I say. "ow" im in my room. I make shore the portal is clear "OW" Active ferns says "shes gonna come block the portal" so we did "here she comes" AHHHH "it worked we got rid of her" then we lived happily ever after the end.
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